Fiction Adaptation: Changes

I have decided to change the idea from the updated version regarding the main character having Multiple Personality Disorder. I have decided against it for a few reasons, however the main and most important of which is that I do not wish to represent a mental illness in any way that could appear demeaning or derogatory. I feel that I cannot accurately represent such a disorder without conducting further research. Something which at this stage is not possible and I feel would be inappropriate to choose to attempt without the said research.

Instead now the character is a conflicted and interesting character in which believes he is a performer within his own mind, living two lives. The real, in which is represented as dull and monotonous and the imaginary, which is represented as surreal.