Completed Script

I have made the final changes to my script with help from Steve Coombs. He gave me a few changes to make which i managed to easily tighten up and improve my script. He was extremely helpful and made improving my righting all the more easier and better.

I cut down the amount of locations and changed the story from it all being about getting milk to a picture frame which I loved. I am very proud of my script and the feedback given by Steve was so helpful.

I would like to say thanks to Steve for his help in making my writing style and script better.